Demitria Lunetta
YA Author of Sci-fi and Fantasy
Wednesday, May 15, 2013
Friday, May 10, 2013
The Blog Chain – Too Many Smiles
The Blog Chain Topic this week is:
What are your
"go-to" scenes or phrases? You know, the ones you have to remind
yourself NOT to use too frequently? What do you do to keep yourself from being
overly reliant on them?
While I don’t have any “go-to” scenes, I definitely have go-to
facial expressions…as in smiling. When I’m in the early rough draft stages of
my writing, I always use smiling as a filler reaction/action/expression.
For example:
She looked at him with a sad, tight smile.
“It’s not what you think,” he said with a friendly smile.
She smiled bravely. “I know…it’s just…”
He took her hand and offered her a smile. “I had to do it.”
Okay, so that’s an over-the-top example (from a soap opera
perhaps?) but you get the idea. I always have to back in and make sure people
aren’t smiling so damned much, cause really, if you think about it, it’s kind
of creepy.
I think it’s easier to edit out your “go-to” words and
phrases then to try and banish them altogether. In edits you can more clearly
see a scene and work in what people would actually do in a situation.
That’s all for now, (she said with a smile.) J What are your go-to scenes or phrases?
Keep following this topic on the chain and check out Michelle’s blog on Monday, or look back at Katrina's post from yesterday.
Labels:
Editing,
The Blog Chain,
Writing
Monday, May 6, 2013
IN THE AFTER Launch Party Date Set!
Join me for my book launch!
When: June 28th at 7:30pm
Where: The Book Cellar in Lincoln Square - 4736-38 N.
Lincoln ave., Chicago, Illinois 60625
There will be cupcakes, photo ops, door prizes, giveaways,
swag galore and of course, me!
Hope you can come!
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In the After
Friday, May 3, 2013
Wednesday, May 1, 2013
Kirkus Review of IN THE AFTER!
To authors, Kirkus can be pretty scary...they have a reputation for telling it like it is. I was so happy (and more than a little relieved) when I read this!
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HarperTeen,
In the After,
Reviews
Monday, April 29, 2013
ARC Spotlight – GOLDEN BOY by Tara Sullivan
Thirteen-year-old Habo
has always been different— light eyes, yellow hair and white skin. Not the good
brown skin his family has and not the white skin of tourists. Habo is strange
and alone. His father, unable to accept Habo, abandons the family; his mother
can scarcely look at him. His brothers are cruel and the other children never
invite him to play. Only his sister Asu loves him well. But even Asu can’t take
the sting away when the family is forced from their small Tanzanian village,
and Habo knows he is to blame.
Seeking refuge in Mwanza, Habo and his family journey across the Serengeti. His aunt is glad to open her home until she sees Habo for the first time, and then she is only afraid. Suddenly, Habo has a new word for himself: Albino. But they hunt Albinos in Mwanza because Albino body parts are thought to bring good luck. And soon Habo is being hunted by a fearsome man with a machete.
To survive, Habo must not only run but find a way to love and accept himself.
Seeking refuge in Mwanza, Habo and his family journey across the Serengeti. His aunt is glad to open her home until she sees Habo for the first time, and then she is only afraid. Suddenly, Habo has a new word for himself: Albino. But they hunt Albinos in Mwanza because Albino body parts are thought to bring good luck. And soon Habo is being hunted by a fearsome man with a machete.
To survive, Habo must not only run but find a way to love and accept himself.
Recommended for fans of: YA or MG Contemporary with Substance/
African Culture
This book is amazing. Sullivan has clearly done extensive
research on Albinos living in Tanzania. You are immersed in African culture,
but you always feel like you belong there. Everything feels very authentic and
accurate. It speak from a place that is more than just intellectually though,
GOLDEN BOY feels so genuine. You feel stricken when the family is forced to
leave their home, just as Habo does. You also get to go on a journey with him
as he learns about his condition and begins to grow as a person. I think anyone
who has ever felt different can connect with Habo as a MC. GOLDEN BOY
definitely deserves the starred Kirkus review it received.
GOLDEN BOY is available for pre-order and will be released
on June 27th.
Back Wednesday with the Kirkus review of IN THE AFTER!
Wednesday, April 24, 2013
Two Months To Go!
Tomorrow marks two months until IN THE AFTER releases! I am so freaking excited! Here's the countdown widget and don't forget to enter this month's ARC giveaway!
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In the After
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